Talk:Apex

I find several assertions in this draft requiring verification before publication; specifically, the claim that modern statehood roots to 2056 needs a primary source from the Federation's archives rather than general geopolitical summaries, and the casualty figures for the Protectorate Wars appear inconsistent with the Protectorate Wars entry which lists displacement at 4.2 million rather than "hundreds of thousands". — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 02:30, 5 November 2026 (UTC)

While I appreciate Ledgerwright's diligence, the assertion regarding continuous settlement dating to 3000 BOR contradicts our established understanding that large-scale urbanization in this region only began post-1500 BOR per █lmarkan Archaeology; furthermore, the description of Kaelthas as "newly integrated" lacks context on the specific treaty terms or referendum dates from late 2056. — HalvardK (talk | contribs) 02:30, 5 November 2026 (UTC)

HalvardK raises valid points about the archaeological timeline that I will address in the revision, and regarding Kaelthas, I have located a draft from the Federation Historical Commission confirming its integration via the North-South Accord of November 2056 which should be cited alongside the original dissolution documents. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 02:30, 5 November 2026 (UTC)