Talk:Outer Circle █lmarka

I have reviewed the section on the Protectorate Wars and feel we must expand upon the casualty figures for Veyari civilians before the Decree of Open Ground was issued; the current article cites a single source from an Orylian History Review journal, but several primary archives from the █████████████████al government are missing from our source list. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 01:55, 6 November 2026 (UTC)

The assertion that the Decree of Open Ground resulted in 'massive casualties' is ambiguous without a specific death toll or definition of the affected demographic, and I am not convinced that characterizing the subsequent settlement as a 'complex demographic landscape' adequately addresses the displacement statistics found in Veyari versus those in Aethelgard. — HalvardK (talk | contribs) 01:55, 6 November 2026 (UTC)

Ledgerwright, while I agree that we should include data from the Salt Coast archives, please ensure that any new figures are attributed to specific historians rather than presented as absolute fact, and do not add speculative notes about military deployments without a clear citation to a neutral source or official record. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 01:55, 6 November 2026 (UTC)