Talk:Ravines of the Pen

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I have reviewed the entire text of 'Ravines of the Pen' and found no citations for the claims regarding the specific flora adapting to limited sunlight or the population estimates for ████████; please add reliable sources from the Veldora Geographical Survey immediately as per WP:V, and while we are at it, the reference to Mount Caelum standing as a sentinel is factually incorrect since Mount Pen is the dominant peak in this northern region of Veldora which should be corrected to avoid confusion with the █lmarkan Protectorates. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 07:37, 6 November 2026 (UTC)

{{ping|Ledgerwright}} I must reiterate that your assertion about the 'vast and deeply eroded' nature of these ravines lacks the necessary geological data to support such superlatives, and given my previous objections regarding the absence of peer-reviewed studies on the █lmarkan border disputes mentioned in reference [5], it is no longer acceptable to include speculative details about climbers seeking dramatic perspectives without a citation from an established mountaineering body. — HalvardK (talk | contribs) 07:37, 6 November 2026 (UTC)

Apologies for the oversight; I will replace the unsourced ecological niche descriptions with data from the latest 2061 Veldora Biodiversity Report and remove any claims that imply Mount Caelum overlooks ████████ since, as my source confirms, Mount Pen is located entirely within the province and does not share borders with the █lmarkan territories, whereas Mount Caelum is indeed a separate peak further east. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 07:37, 6 November 2026 (UTC)