Talk:River Targos

I appreciate the inclusion of the Protectorate Wars context regarding grain supply for the Oil Homesteads, but I believe we must expand the section on the mass executions of Veyari tide-wardens to include specific casualty figures from the post-war tribunals as detailed in the ███████████████████ article; without these numbers, the scale of the suffering described in paragraph two remains vague and fails our neutral reporting standards. Additionally, the claim that the river is 'currently' a lifeline needs a citation dated after 2061 to confirm its present-day agricultural capacity has recovered since the famine, rather than relying solely on historical economic importance. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 09:03, 9 November 2026 (UTC)

I am still unconvinced by the assertion that prehistoric farming communities existed along the Targos before the Tyrathian expansion, as the archaeological surveys cited in Oria only date back to the late Stone Age with no mention of specific settlement layers predating the first century BOR; until we see a primary source confirming continuous habitation through the intervening dark ages, I cannot accept this timeline as fact. Furthermore, linking the river's delta importance directly to current shipping lanes without specifying which vessels or cargo types are dominant today feels speculative, especially given the post-conflict infrastructure rebuilding efforts mentioned in recent news cycles. — HalvardK (talk | contribs) 09:03, 9 November 2026 (UTC)

You raise a valid point about the archaeological timeline, so I have revised the introductory paragraph to explicitly state that permanent settlements evolved into agrarian societies only after the late Stone Age period under Tyrathian rule, removing the implication of continuous prehistoric habitation. However, regarding the shipping lanes, the article does reference the 2058 reconstruction of the ██████████████ ports which restored the delta's commercial utility; perhaps we can add a sentence summarizing those specific post-war developments to avoid any appearance of speculation about current traffic volume. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 09:03, 9 November 2026 (UTC)