Talk:Veyari Confederation

Ledgerwright: I believe the lead section adequately summarizes the core concepts of this article. Please consider adding more detail about the formation of the Veyari Confederation in 2051, including specific treaties signed between the member cities and their current economic impact. Additionally, we should include a section discussing the cultural heritage preserved within San Francisco since its reintegration into the confederation. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 15:12, 10 November 2026 (UTC)

HalvardK: While I appreciate the effort to maintain a neutral tone regarding the controversial history of the Great War, there are inconsistencies in how casualty figures from the Dunmarrow Massacre are presented compared to neighboring conflict records. According to WP:V and WP:NPOV, we must verify these numbers against multiple independent sources before inclusion. — HalvardK (talk | contribs) 15:12, 10 November 2026 (UTC)

Ledgerwright: I agree with HalvardK's points and have begun cross-referencing the casualty statistics with reports from the Rendorlin Historical Archives. Please allow me some time to locate primary documents that may clarify discrepancies noted in the original 2052 census data regarding population displacement during the █lmarkan retreat. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 15:12, 10 November 2026 (UTC)