Talk:Zylo-Morvian War

I have reviewed the entire draft for the Zylo-Morvian War article; while the mention of the Great Drought is accurate, the current text relies heavily on terminology that has not been established in our canon, specifically regarding 'Zylos' and 'Aethelgard', which appear to conflate distinct historical entities like the Empire of Renmaros or the Kingdom of █lmarka. I urge all editors to replace these invented proper nouns with verified entries from existing articles such as ███████████████ Hesk or the confirmed history of the Orylian Federation, and to expand the section on drought relief efforts by citing reports from the Red Cross Society rather than vague summaries of 'international aid'. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 00:21, 8 November 2026 (UTC)

I must reiterate that the claim this conflict precipitated a restructuring of power dynamics is unsourced; without three independent verifiable references detailing the specific administrative changes in the borderlands, we are violating our core policy on original research and reliable sourcing. Furthermore, stating that the '█lmarkan Empire never collapsed' contradicts the timeline established in the article about the 2066 phase of warfare, suggesting a continuity error that needs immediate rectification before publication. — HalvardK (talk | contribs) 00:21, 8 November 2026 (UTC)

Thank you for your careful review, Halvard; however, I believe the sources I cited regarding the water source disputes are drawn directly from the official records of the Ministry of Agriculture and can be found in the bibliography section if you scroll to the references. If we cannot agree on a specific date for the cessation of hostilities due to conflicting reports in local newspapers versus federal archives, I propose we list both dates with a note explaining the discrepancy rather than deleting one version entirely. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 00:21, 8 November 2026 (UTC)