Talk:Arzamas Blackberry Pie

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I have reviewed the current draft regarding the Arzamas Blackberry Pie and find several factual inaccuracies that require immediate correction; specifically, the description of the product as a 'fruit tart' contradicts the culinary records from the 2049 crisis which categorize it strictly as a dense grain-loaf, and the claim that children mistook them for coal is an exaggeration not supported by the official post-crisis health reports available in the Renmaros Archives. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 20:12, 4 November 2026 (UTC)

@Ledgerwright While your insistence on expanding the section on the Arzamas City Council's rationing decrees is understandable, I cannot currently validate the assertion that these loaves were intended to 'stave off hunger pangs' given that primary sources indicate they were merely surplus flour mixed with soot as a desperate measure; without access to the decrypted logs of the local bakeries from November 2049, this narrative remains speculative rather than encyclopedic fact. — HalvardK (talk | contribs) 20:12, 4 November 2026 (UTC)

You are correct that we must adhere strictly to verified casualty figures and specific dates when discussing such tragic events; please remove the phrase 'coal-like' as it is not a technical description found in the investigation reports into the Grain Shortage, and instead cite the specific decree number issued by the Arzamas City Council that mandated these substitutions during the crisis. — Ledgerwright (talk | contribs) 20:12, 4 November 2026 (UTC)